Title Sequence Coursework - Pitch(2)

This is our PowerPoint presentation of our pitch and the video of my partner and i pitching it.

In our lesson today, my partner and I presented our improved pitch to our class. I improved the pitch by changing all that was taken from the feedback,  from the first attempt. The time we will not need to improve and present again, but we can still make improvements from the feedback sheet that we have received

During the pitch, I think I was a lot more confident when presenting. I ensured that for this pitch that, my parent and I, both had the presentation printed out, with notes. This is prevent us looking up at the presentation and reading from the slides. We received feedback sheets again this week. I will analyse them and they will help us improve the important factors of the film. 

This time the feedback sheets have some different opinions on it. Most the feedback told us that we need to research into our target audience more, because it might be targeted at the wrong gender. I agree with because if the film is an Action Thriller then the target audience will be mainly aimed at males. This is because of the intense action and the male gaze theory. Some individual responses to the pitch was that the budget was to high, but to low for Christopher Nolan to direct the film, and that the narrative was a little confusing. I agree with both of these responses because I think my partner and I could have explained the narrative more, without confusing the class. Furthermore, I think that the budget should be lower, as these kinds of budgets are only used for really big budget films, which have large target audience ranges. However the budget would be too low for Christopher Nolan to direct as he normally gets paid large amounts of money for directing. I should have researched more into how much Nolan gets paid, as we would not be able to pay him enough for him to direct our film.