Title Sequence Coursework - Pitch(1)

This is our PowerPoint presentation of our pitch and the video of my partner and I pitching it.

In our lesson today, my partner and I presented our pitch to our class. The pitch was about our film and this was the first time we pitched the idea. We have been given a lot of feedback that we can use to improve out pitch for next time. We will be presenting it again next week, when we have improved it.

During the pitch, I don’t think I was as confident as I should have been. When we present next week will ensure that I am ready and confident in what I have to say. In addition, we forgot to say the narrative of the film, which was indicated on most of the feedback sheets. For next time I will prepare some note for us to refer back to, so we don’t forget to say anything.
All the feedback sheets mostly indicated the same thing. On the sheets it shows that us choosing Liam Neeson to star in our film was a good idea. I think using Liam Neeson would be a good idea because his played similar characters in past. For example, he played Bryan Mills in Taken; this character is very similar to the main character in our film. Some criticism we got back was that we need a better target audience and a higher budget for the production company we have chosen. I agree with this and shall research more on how much Warner Bros spent on films that has similar concepts to ours.  In addition, the feedback told us that the gender target audience wasn’t stated in the presentation. Next time I will ensure that the gender target audience is included and explain why.

For next week, I will improve my pitch by taking the points from the feedback sheets and putting them into our presentation. I will improve on all the points and try to be more confident when speaking to the class.